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How does this poem sound?

By admin on Mar. 1, 2010.

I wrote this for someone who likes horses.

A horse is an animal adored by many.

They are beloved and worth every penny.

A horse is a gift from heaven.

They are the dreams of girls starting at age seven.

A horse is a noble beauty,

With its shiny coat, more precious than a ruby.

A horse is a possession, which the lucky few get to know

They are mystic entities, as a river’s flow.

Emblems of justice and the peak grace

Every horse puts its owner in his place

I like it. I think the last line should put the whole poem into place. You know it just seems like another line when the last line of a poem is usually like the ending or the summary.

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